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		<title>Comment on Miami Outlaw by Anonymous</title>
		<link>http://terencecantarella.com/2012/01/26/miami-outlaw/#comment-385</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jan 2012 01:44:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[James W says:

I heard Bailey&#039;s story this morning and just started crying in my car. Couldn&#039;t wait to get home and hug my dogs]]></description>
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<p>I heard Bailey&#8217;s story this morning and just started crying in my car. Couldn&#8217;t wait to get home and hug my dogs</p>
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		<title>Comment on Miami Outlaw by BK</title>
		<link>http://terencecantarella.com/2012/01/26/miami-outlaw/#comment-384</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Jan 2012 18:36:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I listened to your story about Bailey this morning on my way to work.  I could not stop myself from crying…]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I listened to your story about Bailey this morning on my way to work.  I could not stop myself from crying…</p>
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		<title>Comment on Third-Person Confusion by Gary Wedlund</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Gary Wedlund]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Dec 2011 00:45:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thanks for the good comments on the definitions.  The thing for most writers to know is that some of these are quite useful, while others are mine fields, particularly for fiction writers.  For example, many people take this definition of third person omniscience definition, and say, &quot;Wow, that&#039;s what I do.  Now I can claim I am doing something legitimate.&quot; Well, yeah, you are conforming (loosely) to the definition of a way to work, but in fact 99% of the time when writers are doing third person omniscience, they are really just headhopping and never getting close enough to anyone to actually write a story that matters.  Just because one finds a definition of a way of working that seems to justify what they are doing, doesn&#039;t mean what they are doing is the best choice.  

Ironically, those who understand what I just wrote the least, need to understand it the most. There are a number of excellent reasons why the vast majority of third person work is done either third person limited, or third person limited multiple. My strongest suggestion is that writers master third person limited before they even consider any other RADIAL form of third person writing.

Let me add to these thoughts by suggesting omniscience theatrical is far more useful than the more commonly understood, pure omniscience.  That way, when you do drop to character, you have some grounding and haven&#039;t done the proverbial community visit. Headhopping is a very dangerous tool in the hands of just about everybody.  It begs the question, is there value to any constraints at all, if one chooses to legitimize bad writing under the seeming license of a definition? What can be defined does not mean that which should be applied. The last technique I would sanction from literally any writer is pure omniscience. Those who disagree with me, may, but I doubt the work justifies the approach.

One final thought.  There is a technique known as passing the baton. This is a form of multiple limited, but handled in a way that allows the POV to be carefully and meaningfully moved from character to character, within sections or chapters. This is far more useful than pure omniscience because it implies care and one at a time POV handling.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the good comments on the definitions.  The thing for most writers to know is that some of these are quite useful, while others are mine fields, particularly for fiction writers.  For example, many people take this definition of third person omniscience definition, and say, &#8220;Wow, that&#8217;s what I do.  Now I can claim I am doing something legitimate.&#8221; Well, yeah, you are conforming (loosely) to the definition of a way to work, but in fact 99% of the time when writers are doing third person omniscience, they are really just headhopping and never getting close enough to anyone to actually write a story that matters.  Just because one finds a definition of a way of working that seems to justify what they are doing, doesn&#8217;t mean what they are doing is the best choice.  </p>
<p>Ironically, those who understand what I just wrote the least, need to understand it the most. There are a number of excellent reasons why the vast majority of third person work is done either third person limited, or third person limited multiple. My strongest suggestion is that writers master third person limited before they even consider any other RADIAL form of third person writing.</p>
<p>Let me add to these thoughts by suggesting omniscience theatrical is far more useful than the more commonly understood, pure omniscience.  That way, when you do drop to character, you have some grounding and haven&#8217;t done the proverbial community visit. Headhopping is a very dangerous tool in the hands of just about everybody.  It begs the question, is there value to any constraints at all, if one chooses to legitimize bad writing under the seeming license of a definition? What can be defined does not mean that which should be applied. The last technique I would sanction from literally any writer is pure omniscience. Those who disagree with me, may, but I doubt the work justifies the approach.</p>
<p>One final thought.  There is a technique known as passing the baton. This is a form of multiple limited, but handled in a way that allows the POV to be carefully and meaningfully moved from character to character, within sections or chapters. This is far more useful than pure omniscience because it implies care and one at a time POV handling.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Titanium Dreams of Omar Ali by Mechanic shop Miami</title>
		<link>http://terencecantarella.com/2009/03/02/the-titanium-dreams-of-omar-ali/#comment-379</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mechanic shop Miami]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:37:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hey there,  You&#039;ve performed an incredible job. I will certainly digg it and in my opinion recommend to my friends. I am sure they&#039;ll be benefited from this website.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey there,  You&#8217;ve performed an incredible job. I will certainly digg it and in my opinion recommend to my friends. I am sure they&#8217;ll be benefited from this website.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Third-Person Confusion by Free</title>
		<link>http://terencecantarella.com/2008/03/02/third-person-confusion/#comment-279</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Free]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Oct 2011 14:03:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thank you, thank you, thank you.  The next time some fellow writer tells me there is no such thing as Third Person Omniscient, or that my WIP is &quot;really&quot; in badly done Third Person Multiple with headhopping, I will send them this link.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, thank you, thank you.  The next time some fellow writer tells me there is no such thing as Third Person Omniscient, or that my WIP is &#8220;really&#8221; in badly done Third Person Multiple with headhopping, I will send them this link.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Third-Person Confusion by LeeAnn</title>
		<link>http://terencecantarella.com/2008/03/02/third-person-confusion/#comment-182</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[LeeAnn]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Sep 2011 03:31:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This is a very helpful explanation, but could be eminently more so if there were a couple of paragraphs from the same story shown in each type of POV, with the differences easy to see.  Remember what they say, show don&#039;t tell.
I guess that even goes for defining POVs.
Thank you]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is a very helpful explanation, but could be eminently more so if there were a couple of paragraphs from the same story shown in each type of POV, with the differences easy to see.  Remember what they say, show don&#8217;t tell.<br />
I guess that even goes for defining POVs.<br />
Thank you</p>
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		<title>Comment on Eternity by Gastriches</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Gastriches]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Sep 2011 18:48:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Re, you have to let me read this some time.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Re, you have to let me read this some time.</p>
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		<title>Comment on One Big House, Many Different Lives by Doors Melbourne</title>
		<link>http://terencecantarella.com/2010/05/26/one-big-house-many-different-lives/#comment-179</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Doors Melbourne]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Sep 2011 17:13:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Before I got to click your link.. I wonder what&#039;s behind that door... until I get it.. Wow... so beautiful... and great story behind it..]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Before I got to click your link.. I wonder what&#8217;s behind that door&#8230; until I get it.. Wow&#8230; so beautiful&#8230; and great story behind it..</p>
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		<title>Comment on Third-Person Confusion by Alice</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Alice]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Aug 2011 21:42:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This is one of the best explanations I&#039;ve heard of POV. I was confused about third person limited omniscient. Thanks for clearing up the confusion!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is one of the best explanations I&#8217;ve heard of POV. I was confused about third person limited omniscient. Thanks for clearing up the confusion!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Vertical City by Emil Hubschman</title>
		<link>http://terencecantarella.com/2011/02/08/vertical-city/#comment-141</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 02 May 2011 22:04:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I can&#039;t thank you enough for taking the time to beautifully write this well researched article.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I can&#8217;t thank you enough for taking the time to beautifully write this well researched article.</p>
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